4. 月租500元
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming September. I’ve (開頭,表示歡迎)
found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with (公寓的情況:面積和構(gòu)成)
a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a (房間內(nèi)部的設(shè)施)
bed., a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. (月租)
The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is no far from (公寓的位置和交通)
Jianxin Chinese School. And No.11 Bus can take you straight
to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d
like it? If no, I can try and find another place for you. Just let (結(jié)尾,詢問(wèn)是否喜歡)
me know.
Yours ,
Li Hua
(三)說(shuō)明文體:
說(shuō)明文是以說(shuō)明的方式用簡(jiǎn)潔的文字介紹事物的特性、構(gòu)造、變化或結(jié)果的文章。
說(shuō)明文體的寫作要點(diǎn):
3. 公寓的位置:(芳草街,離學(xué)校一站遠(yuǎn))
2. 公寓的面積、家具(25平方米,床,沙發(fā),書桌,椅子)
1. 公寓的設(shè)施:一室?guī)г∈、廚房
2. 參考詞匯:房租 rent
Dear Bob,
_______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
要點(diǎn)解析:認(rèn)真觀察兩幅圖后,確定表達(dá)要點(diǎn)
4. 努力運(yùn)用生動(dòng)形象的語(yǔ)言,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用形容詞,并要避免重復(fù)單調(diào)地用詞。
描寫文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu):
寫人:
開頭 the beginning--對(duì)該人物進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要地介紹 (如身份,職業(yè)等)
主體 the main body--可以按照時(shí)間的順序或在事件中的主次地位進(jìn)行描述
結(jié)尾 conclusion--對(duì)此人的評(píng)價(jià)或感想。
寫物:
開頭 the beginning--對(duì)該物進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要介紹 (如大約位置)
主體 the main body--按照空間順序(上到下,左到右,里到外,遠(yuǎn)到近等)來(lái)描述此物,令讀者在腦海中有一幅圖畫。
結(jié)尾conclusion--對(duì)此物的看法或感想。
NEMT 2003 全國(guó)
假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在的城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文,來(lái)信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房情況, 并告知住房面積25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右
3. 注意描寫詳略得當(dāng),重點(diǎn)突出。
2. 描寫順序恰當(dāng)。寫人時(shí)由上到下,由表及里。描寫地點(diǎn)時(shí)通常由上到下,從里到外,由遠(yuǎn)到近。
1. 圍繞主題,選好細(xì)節(jié),使文章內(nèi)容既豐富又緊湊。
6. 具體信息:汽車是黃色的,車牌號(hào)是AC864,司機(jī)是一位女性。
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000. I was (時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物)
walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man
came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw (事件的發(fā)生和發(fā)展)
a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into
Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was
crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop but (高潮)
drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a
young woman and the plate number was AC 864. About two (結(jié)尾)
minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to
the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
(二)描寫文體:
描寫文是將題目提供的人物、事物、景觀、地點(diǎn)等用生動(dòng)、形象的語(yǔ)言描繪出來(lái)。在寫作過(guò)程中記敘加描述,讓被描寫的對(duì)象在讀者的腦海中有一幅清晰的畫面。
描寫文的寫作要素:
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