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請修改以下短文：文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下面劃一條橫線（_），并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Dear Joe,
I’m sorry to hear that you want to give up apply for a volunteer for the 2013 National
Games. In my opinion, you’d better not give up this idea.
On the one hand, you have many advantage. First of all, you are good at communicating
others and ready to help others. In addition to, you are familiar with Shenyang. Secondly, be
a volunteer can broaden your outlook and improved yourself, that will be beneficial to your
future work and life. Therefore, I sincere hope you can seize this chance and try your best to
be a outstanding volunteer. Please consider my advice. I’m really looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Jane

請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I
scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,
since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized
however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and
shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to
helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel
every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming andshouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready tohelping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I

scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized

however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

請你修改一下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last November a English forum was held in Busan International High School of South Korea. Students from eight country took part in the forum representing their schools. I was one of the students in our school who was lucky enough to attend it. At the opening ceremony of the forum, students from Busan International High School play a lot of Korean traditional instruments, some of them were really new to us. The forum was very succeed. Every team did a good job and they highly thought of. During our stay in Korea, what impressed on us most was that Koreans love eating kimchi very much. Besides, in my opinion, it isn’t as deliciously as I had imagined.

文中有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧） ，并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:  1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

One day in the restaurant where I worked, I am serving a table of four and each person

had ordered the different kind of fish. Three plate were already on the table when the man

closest to me pointing to one plate and asked me the name of the fish on it. After I could

answer him, he continued to ask me the name of the fish on another one plate. I was about to

answer him while I noticed that the last plate on my tray(托盤) began to fall. They fell noisily

to the floor seconds late, spreading its contents on the carpet. Everyone stared me and I stood

there with a red face.

文中有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last Sunday I went to Beijing National Stadium．At gate I happened to meet some young America tourists．I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat．From the chat I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing but most of them were fond of Chinese culture．They were busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by the changes which had been taken place in the past few years．After come out of the Stadium，we went to the Water Cube and had a good time there．We exchanged our email address so that we could keep touch with each other later．They thanked us again and again．I was very glad to have the chance to practice my oral English．

文中有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2．只允許修改10處,  多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Johnny,

Thank you for speaking to our class last Thursday．We’ve all learned a lot about how you

make your weather forecasts．After your left, we made a list what we had learned．Then we set up the small weather station outside your classroom．From tomorrow on, one student in the class will be the weather forecaster every day．He or she record data in our weather book．In a few month, we will start drawing graphs and charts what show our weather patterns here in Nebraska．Which you can see, your visit has been given us a lot of ideas．Thank you so much for opening our eyes to this interested subject．

                                                                 Yours,

                                                                   Jack

文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

       When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American．I became their guide．First, we went to the Shouxi River．They wanted to look around the river by the boat．After buy the tickets, we got into a boat．We went around seeing the beautiful sight．After that, we went shopping．The sellers couldn't spoke English．Though it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences．They bought some little things with their help．Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures．When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch．After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history．www．

文中共有10處語言錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

It is important to know that a parent can do to help reduce children’s stress.

 If you notice that your child is becoming nerve, he may have problems at the

school. He may has trouble sleep. He may be depressing and begin to suffer

 from headaches. You should talk him to try to discover the cause of her stress.

You can spend extra time help him. In short, you need to be complete

supportive and encouraging all the time.