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8．現(xiàn)在，許多中學(xué)生做作業(yè)時(shí)經(jīng)常上網(wǎng)搜索答案，《21世紀(jì)報(bào)》就此話題展開(kāi)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)文章，向報(bào)社投稿．

1．Reasons	pressure； homework…
2．Advantages	save time； solve problems…
3．Disadvantages	lose the ability； …
4．Opinions and suggestions	…

注意：1．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括表格中列出的要點(diǎn)；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右；
3．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
   Nowadays，many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework．
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Answer 1

分析 題目屬于表格類(lèi)材料作文．題目要求根據(jù)表格所給信息寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)文章，作文應(yīng)涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)．第一部分?jǐn)⑹龀霈F(xiàn)這種情況的原因，第二部分寫(xiě)有點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)；第三部分給出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議．寫(xiě)作時(shí)使用第一人稱(chēng)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)、拼寫(xiě)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)和語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的正確使用．注意作文的條理性，內(nèi)容要充實(shí)，描述現(xiàn)象要客觀．注意詞數(shù)限制．
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：范文注意使用Nowadays，Worse still，As a result，However，To start with，Besides，In my opinion，F(xiàn)or example，Meanwhile等來(lái)銜接上下文，很好地做到了語(yǔ)意連貫、銜接緊湊；范文使用To start with，Besides進(jìn)行列舉，比f(wàn)irstly，secondly更有新意；
范文使用了較多短語(yǔ)和固定搭配：search for，turn to the Internet for help，depend heavily on the Internet，realize the importance of finishing homework independently，try to，build up，communicate with等，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；
范文使用了一些重要的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：表語(yǔ)從句That is because students are under heavy pressure of study；固定句型too difficult to solve，find it convenient to surf the Internet for accurate answers，not only the ability to solve problems but also their interest in study；定語(yǔ)從句which saves them a lot of time；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞asking them to reduce the amount of homework等，語(yǔ)法知識(shí)掌握很扎實(shí)；
measures should be taken to solve the problem這句是寫(xiě)作常用的好句子，也可以用only when…+倒裝來(lái)作為結(jié)尾．

解答 Nowadays，many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework．That is because students are under heavy pressure of study and they have too much homework to do．（高分句型）Worse still，some of the problems are too difficult to solve．As a result，they turn to the Internet for help．
    There are advantages of searching for answers on the Internet．Most students find it convenient to surf the Internet for accurate answers，which saves them a lot of time and helps them solve difficult problems．（高分句型） However，this also brings some disadvantages．To start with，some students depend heavily on the Internet for answers．Besides，they may lose not only the ability to solve problems but also their interest in study．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，measures should be taken to solve the problem．For example，students should realize the importance of finishing homework independently and try to build up confidence in themselves．Meanwhile，they can communicate with their teachers，asking them to reduce the amount of homework．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．