Question

結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作，詞數(shù)不少于60。

In your English class, your teacher shows you the picture beside. Please describe it and say something about it.

要求：

（1）就此材料發(fā)表你的感想；

（2）應(yīng)緊扣材料，有明確的觀點(diǎn)；

（3）請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

In the picture, two hunters are arguing about the way to have their game cooked, but anyhow, they are ignoring that their chance is flying away. How foolish they both are. In our daily life, we on occasion encounter the same situation. What we are focusing on is not the way to accomplish the task, but only the achievement yet to be obtained, which surely wastes our chances and energy without any actual result of our effort. So we must try to avoid such kind of things happening in our life.

【解析】

試題分析：仔細(xì)閱讀圖畫及文字說(shuō)明，首先應(yīng)確定文章體裁。這類文章一般以記敘文或說(shuō)明文為主。記敘文：要抓住記敘文的六要素：時(shí)間(when)、地點(diǎn)(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(w～)和過(guò)程(how)。即：五個(gè)“W”和一個(gè)“H”。根據(jù)圖畫提示把這六個(gè)問(wèn)題寫清楚了，至少可得及格分?jǐn)?shù)。說(shuō)明文：一般先要把圖畫聯(lián)系起來(lái)，弄清楚圖畫的目的、意圖；然后進(jìn)行抽象概括，找出一個(gè)說(shuō)明對(duì)象，接著根據(jù)圖畫從時(shí)間、過(guò)程、步驟等方面加以解釋、說(shuō)明；最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)，得出結(jié)論。對(duì)事物進(jìn)行說(shuō)明時(shí)，一定要做到條理清楚，明了易懂。根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容及所采用的文章體裁，確定文章所要用的時(shí)態(tài)。切記全文時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。

考點(diǎn)：圖畫作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于圖畫中的內(nèi)容，該詳細(xì)敘述、描寫的，就必須要詳細(xì)、具體；可以一筆帶過(guò)的就一筆帶過(guò)。也就是平常我們所講的有時(shí)要潑墨如水，而有時(shí)又要惜墨如金。如圖畫中所有的時(shí)間、數(shù)字或言論需一詞不漏地寫清楚，而有些過(guò)程或原因則可適當(dāng)簡(jiǎn)略。