Question

假設(shè)你是高一（1）班的李華，得知你校校報(bào)要招聘一名英語(yǔ)撰稿員，你想獲得這個(gè)職位，請(qǐng)你寫一封信給負(fù)責(zé)此事的李老師，要點(diǎn)如下：

自我介紹（英語(yǔ)能力、興趣愛好）

參加的意圖（提高英語(yǔ)能力、為同學(xué)服務(wù)）

希望被錄用

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Li,

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                                                                     Sincerely

                                                                     Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Mr. Li,

I’m Li Hua from Class 1 Senior Grade 1. I read the notice that the school newspaper is looking for an English writer and you are in charge of this case. I wonder if I am qualified with the position. Please allow me to give you a brief self-introduction.

I am interested in English and I am one of the top students in my class. Besides, I took part in the English speech competition held by the local TV station last term and I won the first place. This is really inspiring! Since then I have been studying English harder. I insist on reading English newspaper and magazines every day. Now I can fluently communicate with native speakers in English. Of course, writing English articles for the school newspaper is a precious chance for me to practice English. So I am eager to get it.

I would appreciate it if I am accepted as an English writer of the school newspaper. I will try my best to serve the classmates and our school. I am looking forward to your reply.

                                                             Sincerely

                                                             Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：英語(yǔ)寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程。啟動(dòng)知識(shí)信息儲(chǔ)存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對(duì)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語(yǔ)要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時(shí)態(tài)及語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用。因?yàn)檫@是一封求職信要注意用的語(yǔ)言能表示自己對(duì)申請(qǐng)這份工作很真誠(chéng)。信里強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的長(zhǎng)處，但是，在強(qiáng)調(diào)長(zhǎng)處時(shí)，又要避免出現(xiàn)過(guò)于自負(fù)、自信。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：在作文當(dāng)中如果錯(cuò)詞、錯(cuò)句、病句出現(xiàn)的太多，則會(huì)直接影響表達(dá)的效果和成績(jī)。在寫作時(shí)，考生應(yīng)該盡可能地減少錯(cuò)誤，避免出現(xiàn)漢字、拼音、空格等低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤，盡量避開自己使用起來(lái)沒(méi)有把握的單詞和句子。如果為了追求句式的變化而出現(xiàn)了一些本來(lái)可以避免的錯(cuò)誤，就得不償失了。在保證準(zhǔn)確的前提下，考生才可以考慮句式的變化，應(yīng)用較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。