Question

假如你是李越，準(zhǔn)備給在美國留學(xué)的同學(xué)Sam發(fā)個(gè)郵件，介紹學(xué)校的百年校慶活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋��?nèi)容須包括下列要點(diǎn)：

1.      校園裝扮一新(鮮花、紅地毯、彩旗、條幅等)；

2.      近6000校友參會，包括三位科學(xué)院院士；

3.      盛大晚會（10月24日）；

4.      你的感受。

詞匯：1）百年校慶: the celebration of the 100^th anniversary of our school； 2）條幅：banner

3）科學(xué)院院士：academicians of the Chinese Academy of Sciences；4）校友：alumni (pl.)

詞數(shù)：130左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。

Dear Sam,

Haven’t heard from you for a couple of days! How is everything with you there now?

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Yours sincerely,

Li Yue

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sam，

Haven’t heard from you for a couple of days! How is everything with you there now?

Fancy what I am going to tell you today! These days we have been high and excited for the celebration of the 100^th anniversary of the school. The whole school took on a new look before the grand ceremony. The campus was decorated with fresh flowers and a red carpet was rolled out for the celebration. Huge banners were hanging outside the school buildings. Colorful flags and balloons were seen flying high against the blue sky. The school band was standing at the gate, playing sweet melody to welcome the arrival of the guests. About 6000 alumni, including three academicians of the Chinese Academy of Sciences, came back for the big occasion. On Oct. 24, we held a big evening party on the school playground, singing, dancing and cheering! Just fantastic!

As a student of Xiaoshi High, I really take pride in our school. Therefore, I should cherish the opportunity of being able to study here. I am sure I can live up to the expectations of our school. I hope I can bring some glory to our school in the future.

What about you?

Yours sincerely

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文。要求寫個(gè)郵件，介紹學(xué)校的百年校慶活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀愕母惺�。文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來。要求考生根據(jù)要點(diǎn)把中文翻譯成英語。但是自己的感受要用自己的語言組織起來，要使用合適的連接詞把句子連接成文。同時(shí)注意使用高級的詞匯變換使用各種句型來提高文章的檔次。如范文的最后一段I should cherish the opportunity of being able to study here. I am sure I can live up to the expectations of our school.寫得很出彩。

考點(diǎn);考查電子郵件的寫作

點(diǎn)評：電子郵件的寫作要注意格式，這篇作文格式都已經(jīng)給出，要求寫好正文部分，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生只需要把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英文即可。在寫作中一定使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，同時(shí)要加入個(gè)人感想。