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13．假定你是李華．在校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄看到了學(xué)校"英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)"的一則招募志愿者的啟事，啟事中說此次文化節(jié)需要招募20名志愿者，請(qǐng)閱讀啟事，并根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求寫一封應(yīng)征郵件．
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival is now looking for 20student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate．If you are interested，please send an application email to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef．com．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．表示寫信意圖；2．陳述應(yīng)征目的；3．說明應(yīng)征條件（性格、能力等）．
寫作要求：1．郵件詞數(shù)不少于100；2．開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可根據(jù)情況增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫4．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Dear MS Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3． 
．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua 

Answer 1

分析 這是一封申請(qǐng)信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：1．表示寫信意圖；2．陳述應(yīng)征目的；3．說明應(yīng)征條件（性格、能力等）；4．再次保證并且表示感謝．
高分句型：
1 I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．句子里because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句； as well as 表示"也包括"；by doing做方式狀語(yǔ)，表示"以某種方式"．
我真的想要獲得這次寶貴的機(jī)會(huì)．因?yàn)橥ㄟ^提供我的服務(wù)，我能夠提高我的組織能力，交流能力以及在公共場(chǎng)合說英語(yǔ)的信心．
2．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．句子里which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句提到的這件事．
我成功地幫助她組織了幾個(gè)英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)，獲得了老師和同學(xué)的欣賞．

解答 作文范文  
One possible version：
Dear MS Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3．I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．（點(diǎn)明寫信目的）
   I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．【高分句型一】（陳述應(yīng)征目的）As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．【高分句型二】（說明應(yīng)征條件）
   I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration．（再次保證并且表示感謝）
  Looking forward to your reply．
                                 Yours truly，
                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全．通過對(duì)眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，列出寫作提綱．