Question

假設(shè)你是李華，收到好友王林的來信，說他在英語學(xué)習(xí)上用功不少，但是效果不好，他想放棄英語學(xué)習(xí)。現(xiàn)在請你給王林寫一封信，勸他不要放棄英語學(xué)習(xí)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin,

I’m sorry to learn that you don’t do well in English. I’d like to give you my advice on learning English.

First of all, you should be confident in yourself, which is the first step in learning English well. Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English and they are very likely to help you. Thirdly, learning English well is a long process. Remember: reward yourself when you have made progress, which will inspire you greatly. Anyway, you mustn’t give up learning English. Believe in yourself. Where there is a will, there is a way.

Hope my suggestions will work.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文針對收信人王林學(xué)習(xí)英語方面的困惑這個話題提出建議和忠告。第一段首先提出建議的原因（根據(jù)原文的要點(diǎn)）引入建議，第二段建議的具體內(nèi)容。第三段寫客氣話。首尾呼應(yīng)。注意時(shí)態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：考查建議信的寫作。

點(diǎn)評：建議信是對收信人就某一問題提出建議和忠告。建議信有可能寫給某個組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)質(zhì)量提出建議或忠告：也可能是寫給個人，就其人生的某個重大決定提出自己的建議。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

+ 寫信的目的以及所談事情的簡介，包括背景、現(xiàn)狀、存在的問題和可能的發(fā)展；

+ 提出建議的原因；

+ 建議的內(nèi)容；

+ 客氣話或感謝

注意事項(xiàng)：

+ 語氣要誠懇，有禮貌；

+ 建議內(nèi)容要具體；

+ 可提供不止一個解決方案供選擇或一個問題的不同方面提出建議。

建議信開頭常用句式和套話：?

　　I am writing in reply to...

　　I would like to suggest that...

You have asked me for some advice on how to improve...I will try to give some useful suggestions.

　　I’m sorry to learn that．．．　I’d like to give you my advice　on．．．

建議信結(jié)尾常用句式和套話：

　　I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision making anyway

good luck with your studies/work!