Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
參考詞匯：松鼠squirrel；尾巴tail

Answer 1

I think the picture is trying to remind us to be optimistic when facing a problem. As you can see, Jim, the squirrel is caught in the rain. Although it is raining heavily, he quite enjoys it, playing with rain with his hairy tail. There is something we can learn from the squirrel. Faced with a problem, we should be relaxed and positive. Sometimes we might not change a bad situation into a good one, but we can get fun out of something that seems bad and enjoy our life to the most.

解析試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，也是看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了人們對(duì)待困難的時(shí)候要保持樂(lè)觀的態(tài)度，寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文最大的特點(diǎn)是句式多變： I think the picture is trying to remind us to be optimistic when facing a problem. 這句話用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略，As you can see, Jim, the squirrel is caught in the rain.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， Although it is raining heavily, he quite enjoys it, playing with rain with his hairy tail. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， Faced with a problem, we should be relaxed and positive. 這句話用過(guò)去分詞走狀語(yǔ)，Sometimes we might not change a bad situation into a good one, but we can get fun out of something that seems bad and enjoy our life to the most.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句。
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