Question

19．你所在的研究性學(xué)習(xí)小組對(duì)"中學(xué)生的健康狀況"進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，主要調(diào)查結(jié)果如下：

現(xiàn)狀： 身體素質(zhì)逐年下降 肥胖人數(shù)增多 原因： 學(xué)習(xí)緊張，體育鍛煉少 較少參加家務(wù)等體力勞動(dòng) 飲食不均衡 專家建議： 少上網(wǎng)聊天，保證睡眠 每天運(yùn)動(dòng)一小時(shí) 多吃蔬菜水果，不吃垃圾食品

[寫作內(nèi)容]
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，在英文校報(bào)上投稿．內(nèi)容包括：
中學(xué)生的健康現(xiàn)狀、原因及專家建議．
[寫作要求]
1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)在5個(gè)句子中．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
（Last week，we made a survey about middle school students'health condition．）

Answer 1

分析 句型一：The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight．這項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明中學(xué)生的健康水平正逐年下降，越來(lái)越多的人有超重問(wèn)題．本句中that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight是一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，從句中with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)是在句中做狀語(yǔ)．
句型二：One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises．原因之一是他們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)上的沉重負(fù)擔(dān)使得他們很少進(jìn)行身體的鍛煉．本句中that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises是一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句，其中so that they seldom do physical exercises是結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
句型三：To solve the problem，experts advise that we should not chat on line so often  so that we can have enough sleep and we should do sports for at least one hour a day．本句是個(gè)復(fù)和句，其中that引導(dǎo)的是advise的賓語(yǔ)從句we should not chat on line so often  so that we can have enough sleep 與we should do sports for at least one hour a day是并列賓語(yǔ)．其中so that引導(dǎo)的是結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Last week，we made a survey about middle school students'health condition．The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight（句型一）．One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises（句型二）．What's more，they don't do labor work like housework and they don't have a balanced diet．【闡明問(wèn)題】To solve the problem，experts advise that we should not chat on line so often so that we can have enough sleep and we should do sports for at least one hour a day（句型三）．Besides，we'd better eat more of fruits and vegetables and refuse junk foods．【專家建議解決問(wèn)題】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．