Question

高中生在成長的過程中會碰到一些煩惱。就這一話題你班正積極籌備召開一次主題班會。請你依據(jù)下表進(jìn)行必要的思考，并用英語準(zhǔn)備一篇到會發(fā)言的材料。詞數(shù)120左右。

pains	solutions
外形不美	不必在意
朋友少，不被他人理解	加強溝通
學(xué)習(xí)成績不好，壓力大	？

注意：
1．開頭已寫好，不記入詞數(shù)。
2．語言通順，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
Boys and girls:
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. ___________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Boys and girls，
We high school students do have some growing pains，but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. First，some of us are upset about their figures and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second，we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers，parents and classmates. Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart­to­heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have fewer friends. I think being open­minded and friendly will do us good. Third，we may fall behind others，which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently，full of determination.
That’s all. Thank you.

試題分析： 這是一篇主題班會的發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容貼近考生的生活，具有一定的可寫性，要求考生討論一些生活中遇到的困惱，學(xué)生有話可說。在寫的時候，要根據(jù)表格所給提示，并根據(jù)自己的生活和學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，完成文章，運用高級詞匯和句型，使文章句型多樣化，同時恰當(dāng)?shù)慕樵~使用可以使文章更連貫。
【亮點說明】It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all.這句話用it做形式主語， It is one’s inner beauty that matters. 這是強調(diào)句， Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart­to­heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding. 這句話用了兩個非謂語動詞， I think being open­minded and friendly will do us good. 這句話用了動名詞做主語，we may fall behind others，which makes us stressed. 這里含有非限制性定語從句，另外，文章使用了 First，Second，Third，這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。