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18．假設(shè)你是李津，最近在你班的班會(huì)上進(jìn)行了一次有關(guān)是否有必要在國外讀大學(xué)的討論會(huì)，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文短文為校報(bào)投稿．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1．優(yōu)勢：學(xué)校注重培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)合作、環(huán)境優(yōu)雅等   2．不足：費(fèi)用高等    3．個(gè)人看法
注意：1．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上所有要點(diǎn)；開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)100；
Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．【高分句型一】（開頭-引出話題）
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．【高分句型二】The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．（正反雙方論述各自的利弊）
As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．【高分句型三】To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．【高分句型四】（自己觀點(diǎn)）
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提綱類寫作，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫一篇短文，介紹就"是在國外讀大學(xué)還是在國內(nèi)讀大學(xué)"這一問題的討論形成的不同觀點(diǎn)和看法． 
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．開頭-引出話題；2．贊成在國外上大學(xué)觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；3．贊成在國內(nèi)上大學(xué)觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；4．自己的觀點(diǎn)． 
寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主． 
重要短語：hold a heated debate（進(jìn)行一個(gè)熱烈的討論），go abroad（出國），prefer to（更喜歡），domestic colleges（國內(nèi)大學(xué)），as far as sb be concerned（就某人所關(guān)注的而言），get over sth（克服某事），the obstacle of（…的障礙），the expense of （…的費(fèi)用），be advanced（先進(jìn)的），the chances to do sth（做某事的機(jī)會(huì)）． 
【高分句型一】
1．Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently． 
此處是連接詞"whether"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，主句為"Our class has held a heated debate"． 
【高分句型二】
2．Some students think①that ②studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad． 
①此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，主句為"Some students think"． 
 ②此處為動(dòng)名詞作主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)形式． 
【高分句型三】
3．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem． 
此處是由連詞"although"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，主句為"culture difference is a big problem"． 
【高分句型四】
4．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits． 
  此處是由不定式短語"To study abroad"作目的狀語，主句為"you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits"．

解答 Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
       I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．【高分句型一】（開頭-引出話題） 
       Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．【高分句型二】The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．（正反雙方論述各自的利弊） 
       As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．【高分句型三】To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．【高分句型四】（自己觀點(diǎn)） 
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Jin．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．