Question

假設你是李華，你上周從某一網(wǎng)店上購買了一部手機，使用五天后發(fā)現(xiàn)開機有困難，屏幕顯示也有問題。請你給那家網(wǎng)店寫一封投訴信，反映你的問題與要求。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Answer 1

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Dear Sir,
The cell phone that I ordered from your store arrived on time, but only five days later I found it could not work properly.
On Saturday morning I tried to turn on the cell phone as usual but failed. I managed to turn it on after trying it for fifteen minutes. When it was turned on, all I could see on the screen were just some lines! Then I dialed your service number several times, but the line was always busy.
I have to use a cell phone in my job almost all the time. This problem has seriously affected my job and life. Can you get it repaired as soon as possible or have it replaced with a new one? I sincerely hope that you will look into this matter immediately and deal with it quickly and properly.
An early response would be appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

試題分析：所選內(nèi)容與我們的生活相關，又是考生比較熟悉的書信格式，考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯，注意使用一些過渡句或過渡詞來使句子讀起來流暢。但是要注意使用正確的時態(tài)，因為這封信是給出對方投訴意見，還要注意寫作時的語氣要客氣。
點評：考生在寫作時，可以在作文中穿插使用一些過渡性詞語。這樣會使作文條理清楚，連貫自然，行文緊湊。應該注意適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當選用表示因果、遞進、轉(zhuǎn)折關系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感。