Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線(___)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

    Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 surprising→surprised

 has→had

 such→so

 to 去掉

 while→when

 them→→him

 or→and

 operation前加 an

 dangers→danger

 sincere→sincerely

【解析】

試題分析：短文是關于作者的朋友Allee出意外的事情。Allee一向小心，每次都要等綠燈才過馬路，但是那天他在過馬路時卻被突然出現(xiàn)的車撞了，意外發(fā)生后他立刻被送到附近的醫(yī)院。當作者去探望他的時候，他雖然脫離了危險但是面色仍然蒼白。

 考查形容詞用法。I was surprising to hear that…。surprising 意思是“令人驚訝的”，此處是說明主語“我”的情況，應該用surprised表示人感到驚訝的，所以把surprising改為surprised.。

 考查動詞時態(tài)。I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car 。主句用過去時態(tài)，賓語從句應該也用過去時的某種形式，所以把現(xiàn)在完成時改為過去完成時，故把has改為had。

 考查副詞辨析。he was such careful that he didn’t go… such 用來修飾名詞，而careful是形容詞，應該用so來修飾。所以把such改為so。

 考查非謂語用法。he saw the traffic light to turn green. See sb do sth “看見某人做某事”，see 后面應該用省去to 的不定式做賓補，所以把to 去掉。

 考查連詞用法。But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car …此處是固定句型 hardly…when 表示“一。。。就，”句意：他剛到路中央，這時看到一輛車開了過來，所以把while改為when。

 考查代詞用法。he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them.從上文可知汽車是朝他沖過來，所以把them改為him。

 考查連詞用法。He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away.“ He was hit by the car”和”was thrown a few meters away”，應該是順承關系，所以把 or改為and。

 考查冠詞用法。He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation .operation是可數(shù)名詞，所以前面加冠詞an。

 考查冠詞用法。he was out of dangers 。out of danger 是固定短語“脫離危險”，在短語中 danger是抽象名詞，所以把dangers改為danger。

 考查副詞用法。I sincere hope he will recover 。此處sincere是修飾動詞hope的，所以應該用副詞形式。把sincere改為sincerely。

考點：考查短文改錯。