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假如你是李華。最近，你校舉辦了一次“成長(zhǎng)記錄袋”展示活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下列內(nèi)容，給你的筆友Peter寫一封電子郵件，介紹這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/P>

時(shí)間／地點(diǎn)：2012年3月9日下午4∶30－6∶00。學(xué)校展廳。

活動(dòng)主題：促進(jìn)學(xué)生的發(fā)展。

活動(dòng)要求：每班選出10個(gè)優(yōu)秀“成長(zhǎng)記錄袋”參展。記錄袋內(nèi)容包括：

1．學(xué)生作品或成績(jī)；

2．成長(zhǎng)的足跡；

3．評(píng)價(jià)或感想。

活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：

1．全體學(xué)生觀看展覽；

2．評(píng)委現(xiàn)場(chǎng)打分決定名次。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．信件格式已為你給出。

參考詞匯：成長(zhǎng)記錄袋portfolio(s)；評(píng)價(jià)assessment

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Peter, 　　I am writing to tell you about an exhibition in our school．The exhibition of portfolios was held in the Exhibition Hall of our school from 4∶00 to 6∶00 on the afternoon of March 9, 2012．It was to promote students’ development by viewing their self-made portfolios．Each class selected 10 best portfolios to participate．A variety of things involved in students’ growth were in the portfolios, such as pictures of their art works and prizes, some meaningful materials in the process of their growth, assessment from their parents, friends and teachers and their reflection, etc．After all the students and judges finished watching the portfolios, the judges scored each participant on the spot．Those who received the highest scores were awarded by our school． 　　The activity, thought highly of by all the students and teachers, provides a platform for students to display their talents and achievements, allowing other students to learn．The portfolios witness the students’ growing experiences, which is beneficial to their development． Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua