Question

8．假如你叫李華，你的英國朋友Peter給發(fā)來一份郵件咨詢怎樣提高中文水平．請你根據(jù)以下提供的要點，寫一封回件：
1、參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；   2、多看中文書刊、收看中文電視；  3、聽中文歌  4、交中國朋友
要求：1、100字左右     2、為使行文連貫，你可以適當(dāng)增加一些內(nèi)容；
3、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
                                                       
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students．
首先，學(xué)習(xí)漢語課程很重要，因為你可以向老師學(xué)習(xí)，也可以和你的同學(xué)一起練習(xí)．
高分句型二：
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．
此外，要學(xué)唱中文歌是個不錯的主意，因為這樣做，你會更容易的學(xué)習(xí)和記憶漢字．

解答 Dear Peter，
   I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
   Here are a few suggestions．First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students（高分句型一）．Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily（高分句型二）．You can make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
Try and write me in Chinese next time．
Best wishes，
Yours truly，
Li Hua

點評 本書面表達(dá)為議論文，議論文是對某現(xiàn)象或觀點進(jìn)行點評．寫作時，應(yīng)注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點．