Question

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會主席李明，為了增進學(xué)生之間交流，學(xué)生會決定在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上建立中外學(xué)生英文交流論壇，請你根據(jù)下列要點提示介紹此論壇，并號召大家參與論壇。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右.
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫.
3. 開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù).

目的	提供交流平臺
內(nèi)容	要點	細節(jié)
	加強交流	結(jié)識朋友……
	提供幫助	學(xué)習(xí)，生活……
	獻計獻策	學(xué)校發(fā)展，校園生活……

Students’ Union has decided to set up our own BBS. ________________________
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Answer 1

Students’ Union has decided to set up our own BBS. All of us will benefit a lot from it. it offers us chances to communicate with each other. We can exchange our learning and life experiences on it. We can share different cultures as well.
What’s more , it is a good place for us. A life without a friend is a life without sunshine. Anyone who has difficulties with their study and daily life can ask for help on it.
If you have any good suggestions to offer, you can lend a helping hand. Good advice on how to enrich our school life and how to develop our school is also welcome. Wish you to join in and fully express your ideas. ?

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達這些要點以外，還要闡述自己的觀點，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組和好的句子：benefit a lot from “從…中獲益很多”， communicate with “和…交流”， as well“也”，lend a helping hand“助一臂之力”，.Anyone who has difficulties with their study and daily life can ask for help on it.這句話用了定語從句，還有范文還使用了 What’s more這樣的詞，使文章更加連貫。