Question

19．假設(shè)你是班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)給同學(xué)們談?wù)勔恍┎唤】档纳�活方式及其可能造成的危害，并給同學(xué)提出一些建議．請(qǐng)據(jù)此寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿．
不健康的生活方式：
1．缺乏體育鍛煉，久坐不動(dòng)
2．睡眠不足
3．不吃早餐
4．抽煙、喝酒、沉溺于網(wǎng)上游戲
注意：1．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)      2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear fellow students，
I'm going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm they may lead to．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿給同學(xué)們談?wù)勔恍┎唤】档纳�活方式及其可能造成的危害，并提出一些建議，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：不健康的生活方式．1．缺乏體育鍛煉，久坐不動(dòng)2．睡眠不足3．不吃早餐4．抽煙、喝酒、沉溺于網(wǎng)上游戲；可能造成的危害；提出一些建議．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為不健康的生活方式及其危害．第二部分為提出一些建議．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
What's worse 更糟糕的是
There is no doubt that毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)
break down 累垮
sooner or later遲早
get rid of 擺脫
高分句型一：I'm going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm that they may lead to．此句用了that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句．
高分句型二：What is the worst is that some students even have been addicted to smoking and drinking，which may ruin their health此句用了
what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
高分句型三：Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy our life．此句only+介詞短語(yǔ)，主句部分倒裝．

解答 Dear fellow students，
   I'm going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm that they may lead to．（高分句型一）In our daily life，we can see many of us lead an unhealthy life．Here are some examples：some of us don't take regular physical exercise and many lack sleep．Second，others keep on sitting for a long time．What's worse，some don't have a habit of eating breakfast．What is the worst is that some students even have been addicted to smoking and drinking，which may ruin their health．（高分句型二）（不健康的生活方式及其危害）
    There is no doubt that these unhealthy lifestyles do great harm to our health．If we don't change our way of life，we'll break down sooner or later．Therefore it is important for us to develop healthy lifestyles and get rid of the above bad habits．Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy our life．（高分句型三） （提出一些建議）
That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．