Question

It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. No one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one' s task. Strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own.

注意：

1. 不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)。

2. 除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限。

3. 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例。

4. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

5. 詞數(shù)為120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. One of the most typical examples is that in the present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows.

For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one’s task. It is of importance for people to stick to their original aim. A great number of smokers would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. For another, the people who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his circumstance and surroundings. In that case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations around them.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。根據(jù)提示語(yǔ)寫(xiě)文章，一定要寫(xiě)與提示部分相關(guān)的話題。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence.這里含有一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句；One of the most typical examples is that in the present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process.這里含有一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句。For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one’s task.這里含有一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句。For another, the people who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his circumstance and surroundings.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future.這里含有一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句。

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