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11．請(qǐng)你改正下面短文中的錯(cuò)誤．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．3．請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上指定的地方作答．
My friend Dick was seven years old，and her sister Katherine was five．One day their mother take them to their aunt，s to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes．They played for a hour，and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen．She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said，"Dick，cut this cake in half，and give one of the piece to your sister．But remembering to do it like a gentleman．""How do gentlemen do it"Dick asked．"They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，"answered his aunt．Dick thought out this for a few seconds．Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her，"Cut this cake in half，!Catherine．"

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分析 文章講述了作者的朋友Dick的故事．有一天，母親帶他和妹妹去阿姨家玩．阿姨給了Dick一個(gè)漂亮的蛋糕，讓他分給妹妹吃．阿姨告訴Dick，紳士會(huì)把大的給別人．Dick想了一會(huì)后，他把蛋糕給了妹妹，讓妹妹平分．

解答 My friend Dick was seven years old，and her sister Katherine was five．One day their mother take them to their aunt's to play while she went to the city∧buy some new clothes．They played for a hour，and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen．She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said，"Dick，cut this cake in half，and give one of the piece to your sister．But remembering to do it like a gentleman．""How do gentlemen do it"Dick asked．"They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，"answered his aunt．Dick thought out this for a few seconds．Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her，"Cut this cake in half，!Catherine．"
詳解：
1．her改為his；邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是Dick，要用表示男性的his來指代．
2．take改為took；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是過去發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
3．加to；非謂語動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤．句中buy作目的狀語，要用動(dòng)詞不定式來表示．
4．a(chǎn)改為an；冠詞錯(cuò)誤．句中hour是以元音開頭的單詞，要用不定冠詞an來限定．
5．nicely改為nice；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中nice修飾名詞cake，要用形容詞形式．
6．piece改為pieces；名詞錯(cuò)誤．句中有one of修飾，表示其中之一，后面的名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)．
7．remembering改為remember；句型結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是命令，是一個(gè)祈使句，要用動(dòng)詞原形．
8．one去掉；代詞錯(cuò)誤．句中the bigger修飾piece，表示最大的一塊，one重復(fù)了．
9．out改為about；動(dòng)詞搭配錯(cuò)誤．句中think out是想出…；句意表達(dá)的是思考，要用think about．
10．but改為and；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是并列動(dòng)作，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．