Question

隨著生活的不斷現(xiàn)代化，很多年輕人逐漸失去了動(dòng)手實(shí)踐的能力。仔細(xì)觀察下圖，結(jié)合自己的生活實(shí)際，寫一篇120~150詞的英語(yǔ)短文，描述漫畫內(nèi)容，分析原因，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

參考詞匯：動(dòng)手能力hands-on ability 粽子zongzi

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Answer 1

【答案】

What an interesting picture it is! Sitting before a plate of zongzi, the boy is at a complete loss of how to unwrap them and eventually turns to a book for instructions! The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.

Many factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, many children have been forced to focus on their school work only, having little or no space to experience things in real life. Secondly, parents are over-protective. They take over almost all their children’s life. Thirdly, the Internet and certain books provide actually everything we need. It is not surprising for children to develop dependence on them for help.

From where I stand, giving children chances to do thins for themselves is the only remedy. Anyway, nobody can learn to swim without jumping into water.

【解析】

試題分析：看圖作文首先是要仔細(xì)審題，要清楚地知道圖告訴我們什么思想。然后再對(duì)這一情況進(jìn)行詳細(xì)分析，包括出現(xiàn)的原因，解決的方法。本文的話題是現(xiàn)在孩子動(dòng)手能力太差的現(xiàn)象，原因在于長(zhǎng)輩的寵愛，和學(xué)習(xí)壓力讓孩子沒(méi)有時(shí)間和機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)鍛煉自己的動(dòng)手能力。在完成圖表作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

考點(diǎn)：考察看圖作文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說(shuō)明文或議論文，考生則首先要對(duì)圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說(shuō)明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握?qǐng)D畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容。