Question

17．第二節(jié) 書面表達
假定你是李華，你和美國留學生Tony相約通過網(wǎng)上交流學習彼此的語言，經(jīng)過一年的交流學習，彼此都取得了進步，但由于高三后期學習時間緊張，無法抽出時間上網(wǎng)交流．請你給Tony寫一封e-mail，表達對他的歉意．主要內(nèi)容：
1．表達歉意；
2．說明具體原因、提出補救辦法；
3．希望得到諒解．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tony，
I am extremely sorry totell you that I'm unable to carry on helping you learn Chinese．Words fail me to show my deep regret．
It is for one year that we have helped each other．I am grateful for your selfless and effective guidance，without which I wouldn't make such amazing advances in English．However，it won't be a long time before I am faced with a significant challenge，the College Entrance Examination．With my ove rall energy devoted to revision，I have no time to surf the Internet．Failure to communicate with you makes me regretful．My hope is that we can learn from each other after the exam．
I would appreciate your understanding and forgiveness．Hope to study with you online soon．
Best wishes!
Yours truly，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 這是一封道歉信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明寫信的目的，表達歉意；二說明具體原因、提出補救辦法；三希望得到諒解．
高分句型：
1．It is for one year that we have helped each other．句子里It is…that 是強調(diào)句式，強調(diào)了時間狀語for one year．
我們互相幫助已經(jīng)一年了．
2．I am grateful for your selfless and effective guidance，without which I wouldn't make such amazing advances in English．句子里 am grateful for 表示"對…感激"；which引導非限制是定語從句，代指先行詞guidance．從句里用了虛擬語氣，表示更現(xiàn)在的事實相反．
我感激你無私和有效的幫助，沒有這些幫助，我不會取得這么令人驚喜的進步．

解答 【答案】
Dear Tony，
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I'm unable to carry on helping you learn Chinese．Words fail me to show my deep regret．（點明寫信的目的，表達歉意）
It is for one year that we have helped each other．【高分句型一】I am grateful for your selfless and effective guidance，without which I wouldn't make such amazing advances in English．【高分句型二】However，it won't be a long time before I am faced with a significant challenge，the College Entrance Examination．With my ove rall energy devoted to revision，I have no time to surf the Internet．Failure to communicate with you makes me regretful．My hope is that we can learn from each other after the exam．（說明具體原因、提出補救辦法）
I would appreciate your understanding and forgiveness．Hope to study with you online soon．（希望得到諒解）
Best wishes!
Yours truly，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
強調(diào)句式是高中的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，強調(diào)句的結(jié)構(gòu)是：It+be+強調(diào)部分+that （who）+主謂句．強調(diào)句的連詞只有兩個，that和who．當強調(diào)的部分是人，且為句子的主語時，才用"who"，其余用that．
原句：My father did the experiment in the lab yesterday evening．
強調(diào)主語：It was my father who did the experiment in the lab yesterday evening．
強調(diào)賓語：It was the experiment that my father did in the lab yesterday evening．
強調(diào)時間：It was yesterday evening that my father did the experiment in the lab．（注意不用when）
強調(diào)地點：It was in the lab that my father did the experiment yesterday evening．