Question

根據(jù)以下提示，結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing．It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in．
注意：
（1）無須寫標題，文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不得照抄英語提示語；
（2）除詩歌外，文體不限；
（3）文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
（4）詞數(shù)為120左右。
Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times．          

Answer 1

Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times. The best ones to encourage a depressed soul are our friends.
It was three years ago when I just began to attend High School. For the first time I failed in an English exam which I thought I was best at. I felt very depressed. My best friend, Lily, tried to comfort me, offering her emotional support. She listened to me carefully and told me Edison succeeded in inventing the electric bulb after failing more than 300 times. Eventually, with her patient encouragement, I overcame depress and was determined to try hard again. In the next exam, I did it.
Encouragement is the best means to help someone feel better. It can give the courage to fight difficulties and motivate someone to move on. 

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