Question

假如你是李華，對(duì)今年一月出現(xiàn)的嚴(yán)重霧霾記憶猶新，認(rèn)為綠色生活方式對(duì)于改善空氣質(zhì)量十分有益。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文，向�？�“英語(yǔ)角”欄目投稿。

簡(jiǎn)述霧霾情況	倡導(dǎo)綠色生活
持續(xù)三周左右 影響全國(guó)多地 造成極大不便	乘坐公交出行 節(jié)約水電紙張 … …

 

注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫�！�

Greener Life Cleaner Air

It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred on January.___________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Greener Life, Cleaner Air

It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred last January. It lasted for about three weeks and affected many areas in China, causing much inconvenience and even harm to our life and health.

The incident warned us to take actions to fight for clean air before it’s too late! And I believe a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air quality! Firstly, it’s good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible. What’s more, be aware to save water, electricity and paper. Moreover, recycle whatever we can. Last but not the least, don’t forget to influence those around you to follow!

【解析】

試題分析：考查表格類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作。根據(jù)表格要點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)述霧霾情況，并倡導(dǎo)綠色生活，具體信息是以表格的形式給出，考點(diǎn)只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語(yǔ)句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句等特殊的句式來(lái)提高文章的多樣性。象范文的句子：it’s good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible.就使用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，還有狀語(yǔ)從句的省略，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來(lái)，如：firstly;what’s more；last but not least等等。

考點(diǎn)：考查表格類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于表格類(lèi)作文，此類(lèi)作文雖然好寫(xiě)，但是要寫(xiě)出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。