Question

7．假如你是李華，你在美國(guó)的筆友 Henry 在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上偶然讀到了有關(guān)2014 年開(kāi)封菊花花會(huì)的帖子，對(duì)此很感興趣．他來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)菊花花會(huì)的相關(guān)情況．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示的內(nèi)容給 Henry 回一封信．

始創(chuàng)于	1983年
會(huì)期	每年10月18日-11月18日
展區(qū)	龍亭公園為主會(huì)場(chǎng)，其它各個(gè)公園均有展區(qū)
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	賞菊；觀(guān)看精彩節(jié)目（歷史短劇，服裝秀等），品嘗開(kāi)封小吃

注意：
1．詞數(shù)100 左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．參考詞匯：菊花花會(huì)-Chrysanthemum Festival．
Dear Henry．Dear Henry，
I'm very happy to learn that you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum．Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival．
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying a history of over 30 years．From then on，it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year．During the festival，a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed in Longting Park as well as in other parks．There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there．Besides，there are wonderful performances in the parks，such as historical short plays，and costume shows．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．
I am looking forward to your visit next year．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類(lèi)"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫(xiě)一篇短文，詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)2014年開(kāi)封菊花花會(huì)的情況．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．花會(huì)始創(chuàng)時(shí)間；2．會(huì)期；3．展區(qū)；4．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容． 既是提綱作文又是圖表類(lèi)作文．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：be interested in（感興趣），enjoy a history of （享受…的歷史），a variety of （很多，各種各樣的），as well as （和，又，也），admire sth （欣賞…），such as （例如），enjoy delicious local snacks（享受當(dāng)?shù)氐拿牢缎〕裕�，look forward to…（期望做某事）．
【高分句型】
1．The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying a history of over 30 years．
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞enjoying作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為T(mén)he first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，主句的主語(yǔ)the first Chrysanthemum Festival 與所給動(dòng)詞enjoy存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
2．There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there．
這里是固定句型"There is no doubt that …"，意為"毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)…"．此句為同位語(yǔ)從句．
3．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．
這里是動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，主語(yǔ)為Enjoying delicious local snacks，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為is，is之后是表語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear Henry，
I'm very happy to learnthat you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum．Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival．（開(kāi)頭-引出話(huà)題）
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying ahistory of over 30 years．【高分句型】（始創(chuàng)于） 
From then on，it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year．（會(huì)期） During the festival，a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed inLongting Park as well as in other parks．（展區(qū)）
There is no doubt that visitors canadmire beautiful chrysanthemums there．【高分句型】Besides，there arewonderful performances in the parks，such ashistorical short plays，and costume shows．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）
I am looking forward to your visit next year．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．