Question

15．根據(jù)中文大意和英語提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于100詞的短文，所給英文提示詞供選用．注意：不要寫出你的真實姓名和校名．
假設(shè)你是劉偉，你的美國朋友MIKE想通過你了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．請你根據(jù)提示，給Mike寫一封e-mail，向他介紹我國節(jié)日---春節(jié)的情況．
內(nèi)容提示：1．春節(jié)是中國最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．
 2．春節(jié)期間人們的主要活動（節(jié)前、除夕、節(jié)日期間）．
提示詞：剪紙：paper cut，除夕 on the eve of the festival，春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會：the Spring Festival Gala on TV，放煙火，set off fireworks，壓歲錢lucky money
3．希望他能來中國過春節(jié)．
Dear Mike
How are you？I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．              
Best wishes!
Yours，Liu Wei．

Answer 1

分析 【寫作指導(dǎo)】
1．以第三人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時，說明文．
2．善用已給的參考詞匯，展開內(nèi)容．除了介紹"春節(jié)是中國最傳統(tǒng)最重要的節(jié)日"之外，還要按照"節(jié)前、除夕、節(jié)日期間"的順序來介紹春節(jié)．
3．寫作思路：總體介紹春節(jié)-"節(jié)前、除夕、節(jié)日期間"的主要活動-人們的感受（happy，excited）．
【寫作要點】
1．春節(jié)是中國最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．
如：Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China．
2．春節(jié)之前大家進行大掃除，用剪紙裝飾家里．
如：Days before the festival，people clean their houses．They think cleaning sweeps bad luck．They decorate their houses with paper cuttings．
3．除夕時全家人都要聚在一起，吃團年飯．
如：On the eve of the festival，family members get together and have big meals．
4．春節(jié)期間燃放鞭炮煙花，給小孩壓歲錢．
如：During the festival，people set off fireworks to welcome the new year．Kids get lucky money from old people．
5．人們在春節(jié)期間走親訪友．
如：People visit their relatives and friends during the Spring Festival．
6．人們（特別是孩子們）是多么開心��！
如：How happy we all are!

解答 Dear Mike，
     How are you？I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．（高分句型一）There are many traditional festivals in China，such as Spring Festival，Mid-Autumn Festival and so on．I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival to you．Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China．It usually lasts for 15 days．
     Days before the festival，people clean their houses．They think cleaning sweeps bad luck．They decorate their houses with paper cuttings．On the eve of the festival，family members get together and have big meals．（高分句型二）Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV．At midnight，they set off fireworks to welcome the new year．During the festival，kids get lucky money from old people．People visit their relatives and friends．They wish each a happy year and good luck．How happy we are!
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours 
                                                                                                                                                                                           Liu Wei

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．