Question

1．英國(guó)姐妹學(xué)校的老師Dr．Smith將要來(lái)你們學(xué)校開(kāi)展教學(xué)活動(dòng)．來(lái)華前，他給你們年級(jí)的學(xué)生寫(xiě)了一封公開(kāi)信，調(diào)查需求情況．

假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)來(lái)信內(nèi)容代表同學(xué)們寫(xiě)一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表達(dá)對(duì)Dr．Smith到來(lái)的期盼．
2．回復(fù)信中提出的問(wèn)題．
注意：
 1．詞數(shù)100左右；
 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封回信．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要從所給的信中提煉出要點(diǎn)，包括：想聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容，感興趣的話題，喜歡什么樣的老師等．其次，文章是寫(xiě)想法和建議，要以第一人稱(chēng)和現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．最后還要注意書(shū)信的格式和語(yǔ)言的通順流暢．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
can't wait 迫不及待
look forward to 期盼
be keen to do sth 渴望做某事
As for what we hope to get out of your classes，we're most interested in improving our spoken English and increasing our vocabulary．
what引導(dǎo)從句作介詞for的賓語(yǔ)．
especially what kids of our own age there are interested in-the movies and music they like，their school life and so on．
what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句作介詞about的賓語(yǔ)．
Our teachers here in China are usually very kind and hardworking，but also very strict，so we hope that our lessons with you will be a little freer and more fun than those we are used to．
句中but also連接并列表語(yǔ)；that連接賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear Dr．Smith，
My classmates and I can't wait for you to arrive．We're really looking forward to your lessons．（表示歡迎）
As for what we hope to get out of your classes，we're most interested in improving our spoken English and increasing our vocabulary．（高分句型一）We are also keen to learn more about the customs and culture of your country，and especially what kids of our own age there are interested in-the movies and music they like，their school life and so on．（高分句型二）（回答問(wèn)題）
Our teachers here in China are usually very kind and hardworking，but also very strict，so we hope that our lessons with you will be a little freer and more fun than those we are used to．（高分句型三）（表達(dá)看法）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．