Question

根據(jù)下面提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120詞左右的短文，標(biāo)題為：Have a healthy lifestyle
內(nèi)容如下:
（1）許多青少年不注重健康問(wèn)題的現(xiàn)象及導(dǎo)致的危害；
（2）簡(jiǎn)述你的看法，提出你的建議。
Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.     
                                                                                       
                                                                                       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.

However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.

In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some friends and have a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇書面表達(dá)是半開(kāi)放性作文，給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文以要點(diǎn)為基礎(chǔ)，又不拘泥于要點(diǎn)，有適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�，還使用了詞組和句型：pay attention to注意，have a bad effect on對(duì)…有壞的影響， Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.這句話用了倒裝句， And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.這兩句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，

還有文章使用了First, Besides, Thirdly,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。

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