Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，請?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

 

 

Last Monday morning, our English teacher told us to put our writing book on the desk so that he could check them. Honest speaking, I really wondered what would happen that if he found out I did not finish his homework. So I took out my Chinese writing book instead of my English book. When the teacher found this out, I pretended to be very surprising, “Oh, I’m very sorry, but I think that was my English book because they have a same cover. I can take my English writing book to school in the afternoon!” On listening this, the teacher said, “OK!” I narrowly escaped punished. Now I realize I was wrong.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 books→books

 honest→honestly

 去掉that

 his→my

 surprising→surprised

 think →thought

 a→the

 take→bring

 listening→hearing

 punished→punishment或在punished前加being

【解析】

試題分析：

 Last Monday morning, our English teacher told us to put our writing book on the desk so that he could check them. (修飾語our告訴我們不只是一本book，應(yīng)該是許多books)

 Honest speaking, (修飾現(xiàn)在分詞speaking 應(yīng)該用副詞形式Honestly)

 I really wondered what would happen that if he found out(后面已經(jīng)有if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)

 I did not finish his homework.(要與主語I指代一致，I的物主代詞應(yīng)該為my)

  So I took out my Chinese writing book instead of my English book. When the teacher found this out, I pretended to be very surprising, (指人的心理感受要用過去分詞)

 “Oh, I’m very sorry, but I think that was my English book (原來以為是指“過去的事”，應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí))

 because they have a same cover.(same常常和the連用)

 I can take my English writing book to school in the afternoon!” (是帶來而不是帶走)

 On listening this, the teacher said,(listening是不及物動詞，后面不可以帶賓語。同時(shí)這兒也不是指“傾聽”而是“聽見，聽到”)

  “OK!” I narrowly escaped punished. Now I realize I was wrong.(escaped后面要跟賓語，故應(yīng)該用名詞或動名詞的被動式，被懲罰)

考點(diǎn)：短文糾錯(cuò)