Question

某英文報(bào)紙正在舉行“我難忘的一次經(jīng)歷”主題征文比賽。假設(shè)你曾參加過(guò)全校大合唱比賽。請(qǐng)你以“An unforgettable experience”為題，根據(jù)下表提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，準(zhǔn)備投稿。

Activity	a group singing competition
Preparation	…
Result	win the first prize
Your feelings	e. g. No pains, no gains.

注意：（1）短文須包括上述要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等個(gè)人信息；
（3）詞數(shù)：100左右。開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
An unforgettable experience
During the past year at high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of them was______________________________________________________

Answer 1

                         
An unforgettable experience
During the past year at high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of them was
During the past year at high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of them was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we all went out for it. During the week before the competition, we practised singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our effort, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The moment we got the prize, an old saying hit my mind---- No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed friendship, confidence as well as understanding!

試題分析：本題是一篇半開(kāi)放性的作文，要求寫(xiě)出自己的一次“我難忘的一次經(jīng)歷”，以我參加大合唱比賽為主題�？忌�可以從比賽的準(zhǔn)備，賽前的熱身，緊張氣氛，比賽時(shí)的忘我，比賽宣布結(jié)果時(shí)的激動(dòng)等方面做詳細(xì)的描寫(xiě)。要使用合適的連接詞和高級(jí)的詞匯如take sth seriously，confidence等；也要變換使用多種句式，如倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，省略句等來(lái)提高文章的層次。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文半開(kāi)放性作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真梳理要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。