Question

青少年研究專家Susan Beacham在自己的英文網(wǎng)站上開辟專欄，邀請大家分享心目中的“最好禮物”。她認為，禮物貴在心意，應為之付出時間和精力。
假設你是李華，請用英文發(fā)帖，內(nèi)容應包括：
*贊同Susan的看法
*你收到或送出的最好禮物是什么
*該禮物的意義
*期待大家回復
注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80；
2. 符合語言規(guī)范；
3. 在答題卡上作答；
4. 開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。
I am a high school student from China. _________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________.

Answer 1

I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them.
The best gift I’ve ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The book’s name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.
I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply.
Yours ever,
Li Hua

解析審題：該題也具有較大的開放度。但按要求一定要寫出Susan的看法，而這個看法就在試題的寫作說明里：禮物貴在心意，應為之付出時間和精力。而選擇什么樣的角度來寫一定要根據(jù)自己的生活和切身感受，且要量力而行。
寫作技巧：一般情況下應分三段來完成改寫任務：1闡釋Susan的觀點并表示認同。2收到或送出的禮物的具體描寫及其意義。該部分是本寫作任務的重點，應多費筆墨完成。3表期待應另外起段完成，以便閱卷老師發(fā)現(xiàn)和評判內(nèi)容要點。遣詞造句盡量使用自己熟悉的詞句。優(yōu)秀學生一定要在保持正確的前提下盡量使用較為復雜的句型，如狀語從句，定語從句，倒裝句和適量的非謂語動詞。特別強調(diào)：一定要注意卷面整潔并避免拼寫錯誤。