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高中學(xué)習(xí)生涯即將結(jié)束，你校高三年級(jí)擬舉行一次有關(guān)“感恩”的英文演講比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇120詞左以的演講稿。

要點(diǎn)：

1．感恩對(duì)象；

2．為何感恩；

3．如何用實(shí)際行動(dòng)表達(dá)自己的感恩之情。

注意：

1．只能選擇一個(gè)感恩的對(duì)象，如家人、老師、朋友等；

2．可對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：

3．演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名；

4．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, __________________”．

______________________________________________

Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Possible Version 1 　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, mum”． 　　Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love．My mum is an ordinary house-wife．I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during these stressful days．In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as cozy as possible．On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up．I'm fortunate to have such a caring mother． 　　Listen, time is clicking．The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughtel, to realize dreams．I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our dear mums．I have another message for everyone here：Express your love in return．Either a small talk with mom or a cup of tea for her will shine her through． 　　Thank you for listening． 　　Possible Version 2 　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, all my dear teachers”． 　　How time flies!The memory of the first day still stays fresh in my mind when we were packed with a lot of luggage and filled with curiosity about the life in Senior High School． 　　Thanks for all that you've done to us in these three years．It is you who open up our eyes and ignite our thirst for knowledge．When we are depressed by a difficult task or a conflict with our peers, it is you who come to us and guide us to be more open-minded．When we get bored with the tight schedule, it is your humor that fills our class with laughter． 　　In about one month we will head for our future college life．We will bear in mind your words of wisdom and be determined to be a role model and a positive influence like you． 　　Thank you for listening． 　　評(píng)分原則： 　　按參考答案給分，如果出現(xiàn)與參考答案不同，但符合題目要求的答案也可以接受，具體由閱卷點(diǎn)裁定。 　　一、評(píng)分原則 　　1．本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。 　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 　　3．詞數(shù)少于100和多于150的，從總分中減去2分。 　　4．評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。 　　5．拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 　　6．如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 　　二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 　　1．感恩的對(duì)象(只能選擇一個(gè)) 　　2．感恩的理由 　　3．如何用實(shí)際行動(dòng)表達(dá)自己的感恩之情