Question

假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓又杏⒔粨Q生的活動，請根據(jù)活動要求寫一封自薦信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.英語水平

2.身體狀況

3.溝通能力

注意：1.字數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear sir ,

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Yours sincerely,

Li hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Sir,

After reading the advertisement for an exchange student in Britain,I would like to apply for the position.

I am 25years old,male,unmarried.I’m 1.76meters tall,strong and healthy.I graduated from a famous university in 2012 and majored in English.Therefore,I can speak fluent English and have no trouble communicating with different people from defferent countries.I had some useful experience in dealing with different people and working under pressure as a part-time English teaching during my study at university.The most important thing is that I have been an exchange student studying in the USA.If I meet your requirements,I’ll be very thankful for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：提醒考生注意(1)認真審題，確定體裁。要求學生仔細審題，明確體裁，領(lǐng)會出題者用意。(2)構(gòu)思要點。根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達的要點．設(shè)計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架。(3)選詞造句，避難選易。在要點、層次明確的情況下，選用自己最熟悉的單詞、句式進行造句。如果不會用復(fù)雜句就用簡單句表達要點．注意主謂語一致、人稱、數(shù)量、大小寫、標點。(4)認真檢查，避免錯誤。仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致。

【亮點說明】本文在語言表達上清晰流暢，而且要點全面。文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如graduated from, have no trouble communicating with, under pressure還運用了that，if引導(dǎo)的狀語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Therefore等等。不僅反映出作者詞匯的豐富，而且也使文章更加簡潔明了，清晰易懂。

考點：提綱作文。