Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合生活學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)際，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
There is a crack (裂痕）in everything, so is our life, that’s how the light gets in.(Leonard Cohen, Canadian singer). We all possibly make a mistake, but what matters most is how to make use of the mistake to get improved.
注意：1．無(wú)需寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
2．除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
3．文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
4．字?jǐn)?shù)為120詞左右。

Answer 1

Sample:
I still remember the day when I was left alone at home. I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. When he came back, I was so fearful that I didn't tell the truth. The cat was my excuse. My father said nothing, but I could read his distrust .The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled to me. From then on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited my growth a lot. The accident or exactly the “crack” forced me to mind my behavior.
It is the" crack "that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go. With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clearly.

解析試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文，材料以英文的形式給出，學(xué)生首先需要看懂所給材料，根據(jù)材料的意思進(jìn)行構(gòu)思。材料大意是“每個(gè)人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，重要的是，如何利用錯(cuò)誤來(lái)提高自己”。注意作文不能抄寫(xiě)所給材料，不能寫(xiě)成詩(shī)歌。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文敘述了自己打破花瓶這件事，作者勇敢承認(rèn)了自己的錯(cuò)誤，并從中得到教訓(xùn)--誠(chéng)信做人，這給作者帶來(lái)了榮譽(yù)。
范文使用了短語(yǔ)tell the truth, told lies, From then on等；范文使用了較多的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，如結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句so fearful that；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句When he came back；定語(yǔ)從句when I was left alone at home和which was much treasured by my father及which benefited my growth a lot；賓語(yǔ)從句admitted to my father that it was my fault和...is reminding me that I have a long way to go；固定句型forced me to mind my behavior；強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It is...that等，能夠熟練運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，給作文增色不少。
考點(diǎn)：材料類作文