Question

16．假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Alex 下周打算參加在倫敦中國(guó)大使館舉行的一個(gè)接待會(huì)，與一些中國(guó)高中生和老師見(jiàn)面．他向你求助，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件幫他解答以下問(wèn)題．
1．他不太擅長(zhǎng)和陌生人聊天．
2．和中國(guó)同學(xué)見(jiàn)面應(yīng)該談?wù)撃男┰掝}．
3．哪些話題不適合談?wù)摚?br />注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．參考詞匯：Chinese Embassy 中國(guó)大使館
Dear Alex，
I hope you and your family are well---it's a long time sine I heard from you last time．
             ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息外國(guó)朋友Alex 下周打算參加在倫敦中國(guó)大使館舉行的一個(gè)接待會(huì)，與一些中國(guó)高中生和老師見(jiàn)面．他向你求助，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件幫他解答以下問(wèn)題，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：他不太擅長(zhǎng)和陌生人聊天；和中國(guó)同學(xué)見(jiàn)面應(yīng)該談?wù)撃男┰掝}；哪些話題不適合談?wù)摚?、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：have trouble （ in ） doing sth做某事方面有困難；are interested in．對(duì)…感興趣；keep off 遠(yuǎn)離；agree with同意；look forward to 盼望
 I hope you enjoy your trip to the Embassy and that it's fun meeting the Chinese students and teachers．（高分句型一）
Chinese students are like the students everywhere---they like sports，music，fashion，and travel-so it will be easy for you to find topics that they are interested in．（高分句型二）
For many of them it will be their first time in England，so you could ask them about where they've been，what they've seen，what they like and don't like，and what they find interesting．（高分句型三）
It's also not a problem to ask about life at home in China．I'm sure they'd be happy to tell you about what Chinese schools are like and how they spend their free time．（高分句型四）
Of course，it's always a good idea to keep off topics like politics，as people have different opinions，and they may not agree with you．（高分句型五）

解答 Dear Alex，
       I hope you and your family are well-it is long time since I've heard from you．The email is very interesting．I hope you enjoy your trip to the Embassy and that it's fun meeting the Chinese students and teachers．（高分句型一） I don't think you will have any trouble talking to them．
      Chinese students are like the students everywhere---they like sports，music，fashion，and travel-so it will be easy for you to find topics that they are interested in．（高分句型二）For many of them it will be their first time in England，so you could ask them about where they've been，what they've seen，what they like and don't like，and what they find interesting．（高分句型三）
      It's also not a problem to ask about life at home in China．I'm sure they'd be happy to tell you about what Chinese schools are like and how they spend their free time．（高分句型四）Of course，it's always a good idea to keep off topics like politics，as people have different opinions，and they may not agree with you．（高分句型五） I hope this information has been useful，and I wish you the best of luck at the Chinese Embassy---be sure to write and tell me all about it!
      Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．