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Teenagers雜志Conversation With Brad欄目的負(fù)責(zé)人Brad收到了李華的一封來(lái)信。仔細(xì)閱讀下面的來(lái)信，幫助Brad用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信，給出分析并提出合理建議。

Dear Brad,

I'm a student from Xinhua Senior High School．I have some difficulty communicating with my parents．Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied……So I feel lonely sometimes．I would be grateful if you could give me some advice．

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

2．詞數(shù)：120－150。

Dear Li Hua,

　　I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs．

　　_______________________

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One possible version： 　　Dear Li Hua, 　　I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs． 　　I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents．Almost everybody has it or had it when they were in their adolescence．Therefore, it's a common problem shared by many, whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”． 　　As for my advice for you, first, don't hide your feelings．You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents．Second, convince them you have tried your best．It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child．I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard． 　　Anyway, there is no one who love you more than your parents in the world．Whatever you are, they will always be there for you．Love them, and love can heal everything． Yours sincerely, Brad 　　評(píng)分原則 　　1．本題總分為30分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。 　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次。判斷文章檔次時(shí)，要注意要點(diǎn)，更要注意按照詞匯及語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用及表達(dá)方法總體評(píng)價(jià)文章。 　　3．拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 　　4．語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤主要指以下幾種：主謂不一致，動(dòng)詞形式(句子時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài))不對(duì)，詞組搭配不當(dāng)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、詞序不當(dāng)、關(guān)鍵詞用錯(cuò)。 　　5．如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 　　6．詞數(shù)少于120和多于150的，從總分中減去2分。 　　各檔次的給分范圍和要求