Question

高中生活剛剛開(kāi)始，請(qǐng)你以My high school life為題寫(xiě)一篇110詞左右的短文，從生

活、交友、學(xué)習(xí)等方面談?wù)勀銓?duì)自己高中生活的規(guī)劃。

My high school life plan

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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One possible version:

My high school life plan

High school life has just started. Everything seems new to me. As it’s a very important period of time. I will try best to make my high school life colorful and enjoyable.

First, I’m going to make some true friends and work together with them. I believe friendship can help me get over any difficulty. Second, I’ll take an active part in sports activities to build up my body and keep fit. In this way I can put more energy into study. Besides, with the help of my teachers I’ll study hard in order to realize my dream of entering a key university.

To sum up, I’ll try my best to make my high school life worthwhile.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，要注意題目要求“我的高中生活規(guī)劃”故用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。要從生

活、交友、學(xué)習(xí)等方面談?wù)勛约簩?duì)高中生活的規(guī)劃。這些方面都要談到，不要以偏概全。注意字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。另外，要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意層次清晰, 連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活, 不要逐字逐句翻譯。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量避免使用生僻詞匯，在正確使用簡(jiǎn)單句的同時(shí)，要努力使用復(fù)合句，提升作文檔次。

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點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。