Question

假定你是李華。你們學(xué)校和一所美國(guó)中學(xué)簽署了教師交流協(xié)議。在過(guò)去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來(lái)自這所中學(xué)的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國(guó)任教。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求給Sue寫(xiě)封電子郵件。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．對(duì)她表達(dá)感謝之意;
2．介紹她離開(kāi)后你自己及班里發(fā)生的事情;
3．希望了解她的近況。
要求：
1．短文須寫(xiě)在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2．短文詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫(xiě)好的部分）。
3．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。
4．書(shū)寫(xiě)須清晰、工整。
5．郵件中不能體現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息。
Dear Sue,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China．
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
All the best
Li Hua

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Sue,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

解析試題分析：英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程。啟動(dòng)知識(shí)信息儲(chǔ)存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對(duì)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語(yǔ)要求更高。先審題，弄清寫(xiě)作要求，審題是寫(xiě)好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時(shí)態(tài)及語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用。因?yàn)檫@是一封感謝信要注意自己使用的語(yǔ)言的口氣，能表示自己對(duì)對(duì)方的感激之情。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生如果想拿到高分，必須按照要求在作文中覆蓋試題規(guī)定的所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，完成試題任務(wù)，達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，考生應(yīng)該留心是否要點(diǎn)完整，是否有要點(diǎn)遺漏。在題示要點(diǎn)完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料為中心進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。盡量避開(kāi)自己使用起來(lái)沒(méi)有把握的單詞和句子。如果為了追求句式的變化而出現(xiàn)了一些本來(lái)可以避免的錯(cuò)誤，就得不償失了。在保證準(zhǔn)確的前提下，考生才可以考慮句式的變化，應(yīng)用較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。