Question

請你針對以下現(xiàn)象給某英文報社投稿, 談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

現(xiàn)狀	現(xiàn)在的父母都望子成龍, 他們要求自己的孩子除了學(xué)習(xí)以外，還要學(xué)習(xí)很多課程
支持	培養(yǎng)各種興趣，補(bǔ)充課內(nèi)學(xué)習(xí)的知識
反對	業(yè)余時間排得滿滿的, 這給孩子加重了負(fù)擔(dān), 不利于其健康成長
自己觀點(diǎn)	……

注意: 1. 詞數(shù): 100左右; 2. 生詞: calligraphy 書法。
At present, with the development of our society, many parents in China expect their children to keep up with this rapid change and be well prepared for the future.
                                                                       
                                                                       

Answer 1

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At present, with the development of our society, many parents in China expect their children to keep up with this rapid change and be well prepared for the future. Besides their regular studies at school, children are asked to attend all kinds of other classes, such as piano class, dance class, calligraphy class, and so on.
Some believe that extra courses can contribute to the students’ interests in different fields and make up for the knowledge learned in school.
While others argue that this practice lays a heavy burden on their shoulders. As a result, the children almost have no time to play.
I believe parents should let children develop their talents through their own choices and interests and give them enough time and space to learn what they want. Only in this way can the children live happy lives.

解析試題分析：本篇寫作題材是社會現(xiàn)象的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評：考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)�？忌�注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。比如First of all，…Secondly,…As a result, Besides,…. For one thing, …For another,…What’s more,寫作是一個厚積薄發(fā)的過程，是一項(xiàng)將積累釋放于一時的過程。積累越深厚，釋放就越精彩；積累越科學(xué)，釋放就越有效。