Question

20．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處
語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（　�。�，并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
The London Eye，which is 450 feet in high above the Thames River，is the world's biggest spinning structure．It is one hundred feet tall than Big Ben and weigh 1，600 tons．It was built to celebrate a year 2，000．In the London Eye，there are 32 capsules，each of them can hold up to 25 people．And they're air conditioned in summer or heated in winter．From these capsules visitors could see the most beautiful views of London．Now the London Eye regarded as a monument of new millennium （千禧年）．Many visitor from all over the world come to visit it every year．

Answer 1

分析 倫敦眼，矗立中泰晤士河上的一座世界最大的旋轉(zhuǎn)建筑物．比大本鐘還高，重達(dá)一千六百噸．它的建造是為了慶祝千禧年，有三十二個(gè)座艙，每個(gè)都能容納二十五人．里面有空調(diào)，冬暖夏涼，坐在上面可以看到倫敦最美的風(fēng)景．現(xiàn)在被認(rèn)為是千禧年的一座紀(jì)念碑，每年都有全世界的游客來(lái)參觀．

解答 The London Eye，which is 450 feet in high above the Thames River，is the world's biggest spinning structure．
                                                    去掉
It is one hundred feet tall than Big Ben and weigh 1，600 tons．It was built to celebrate a year 2，000．
                                taller                        weighs                                                       the
In the London Eye，there are 32 capsules，each of them can hold up to 25 people．
                                                                           which
And they're air conditioned in summer or heated in winter．From these capsules visitors could see the most beautiful views of London．
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Now the London Eye∧regarded as a monument of new millennium （千禧年）．Many visitor from all over the world come to visit it every year．
                              加is                                 to                                                      visitors
1．in去掉．常用結(jié)構(gòu)，數(shù)詞與形容詞搭配．450 feet high四百五十英尺高．
2．tall改為taller．題干中是表示比較，要用比較級(jí)．
3．weigh改為weighs．題干中主語(yǔ)是it，weigh要用三單形式．
4．a(chǎn)改為the．句意表示的是特指，要用定冠詞．
5．them改為which．題干中each of them can hold up to 25 people是定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面的名詞capsules，要用連接詞．
6．or改為and．句意表達(dá)的是并列關(guān)系，不是選擇．
7．could改為can．文章介紹的是客觀存在的事物，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
8．加is．句意表達(dá)的是被動(dòng)，be regarded as被看作是．
9．of改為to．短語(yǔ)搭配，a monument to sth紀(jì)念某物的紀(jì)念碑．
10．visitor改為visitors．句意表達(dá)的是許多游客，要用復(fù)數(shù)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．