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17．假如你叫王蒙，班主任Ms．Li 想了解班級同學的各方面狀況，以便做考前輔導，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要求，給班主任老師寫一封信，闡述自己的所遇到的煩惱，并請她給你一些建議．
內(nèi)容要求：（1）學習任務重，睡眠不足，缺少體育鍛煉；
（2）父母工作忙，沒時間陪自己；
（3）性格內(nèi)向，沒有多少朋友，很煩惱．
（4）以書信的格式，字數(shù)要求至少80字．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇書信格式的應用文，應注意以下幾點：1．作文內(nèi)容應包括自己所遇到三項煩惱，每條煩惱可適當進行擴充，并請Ms．Li給你一些建議；2．時態(tài)應是一般現(xiàn)在時；3．人稱應以第一人稱和第二人稱為主；4．作文應是書信格式，字數(shù)至少是80詞．
寫作常用詞匯句型：
Recently I have met some problems about my study which troubled me a lot．定語從句 最近我學習上遇到了一些問題，這困擾了我很久．
give sb．useful adivce 給某人有益的建議
beacuse of 因為
stay up late 熬夜太晚
as a result 結果
It is even impossibe for me to watch TV or take exercise．看電視或者鍛煉對我來說更是不可能了．
My parents are so busy with work that they always can't spare time to stay with me．我父母忙于工作，以至于他們總是不能抽出時間來陪我．
deal with處理
look forward to 期待

解答 Dear Ms．Li，
Recently I have met some problems about my study which troubled me a lot，and I really hope you can give me some useful advice．Here are my problems：
Because of heavy homework，I often stay up late．As a result，I don't have enough sleep．It is even impossible for me to watch TV or take exercise．Besides，my parents are so busy with work that they always can't spare（抽出）time to stay with me．As I am not an outgoing boy，there aren't few friends around me，so I always feel lonely and worried．I don't know how to deal with these problems．
So Ms．Li，please give me some advice about my trouble，I am looking forward to your reply．
 Yours
Wang Meng

點評 本題是一篇書信格式的應用文，應仔細審題，在闡述煩惱時應按照所給提示進行依次闡述，并做適當?shù)臄U充，使內(nèi)容更加具體充實．其次注意多用亮點的詞匯句型，多變換句型，使文章更生動；最后應注意時態(tài)人稱、單詞正確書寫、標點符號等細節(jié)問題．