Question

書面表達(dá)：

熊熊是個(gè)很聰明的學(xué)生，住在射陽,但他有一些不好的習(xí)慣，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格提供的信息，用英文寫一篇短文，并針對(duì)他存在的一些問題提出合理的建議。

姓名	熊 熊
班級(jí)	七年級(jí)一班
外貌	大眼睛、矮而胖，戴眼鏡
喜歡	唱歌、聽音樂，喜歡吃漢堡，喝可樂
不喜歡	不喜歡游泳、跑步，吃蔬菜
寒假打算	放煙花，吃餃子，看舞獅，玩電腦游戲
建議	至少兩條

具體要求：

1. 不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

3. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Xiong Xiong is a clever student. He lives in Sheyang.

Answer 1

Xiongxiong is a clever student. He lives in sheyang. He studies in a middle School.He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He isn’t tall but fat. He has big eyes He wears glasses.

He likes singing and listening to music. He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables.He likes hamburgers and coke. He also dislikes swimming and running.

He plans to play fireworks, eat dumplings, watch lion dance and play computer games.

I think he must change his lifestyle. He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health. He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見短語：is good at擅長做某事likes singing喜歡做某事are good for對(duì)。。有好處。He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables.這個(gè)句子中but表示轉(zhuǎn)折。He also needs to do some exercise like playingbasketballand running in his free time.這個(gè)句子中need是個(gè)實(shí)義動(dòng)詞需要，need to do需要做某事，like是介詞表示 象。。，and連接playing,running并列，所以時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。