Question

假昨天你校做了“我愛我家鄉(xiāng)”的問卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息，寫一篇80詞左右的短文,最后一列請(qǐng)自由發(fā)揮。(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

The best	Name	Reason (原因)
Movie theater	Ganxian Theater	有最舒服的座位和最好的服務(wù)
School	No. 2 High School	有最有才能的老師和最大校園
Restaurant	Tian Yue Restaurant	它有最美味的食物
Park	Greenwood Park	附近有咖啡店，可以看街頭表演

Yesterday our school did a survey of which place we think is the most special in our hometown.

Here are the results.

Answer 1

Yesterday our school did a survey of which place we think is the most special in our hometown. Here are the results.

Jinniu Park is the best park in town. The river there has the cleanest water. In spring, many children like flying kites in the park. Most of the movie theaters are good, but New Century Theater is the best because it has the most comfortable seats. No. 1 High School has the best teachers, the most beautiful and biggest campus. The best hospital is Xiehe Hospital. It has the best doctors and the best service.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。題中給出了文章的開頭，也就限定了文章的基本內(nèi)容，要些什么。Yesterday our school did a survey of which place we think is the most special in our hometown. Here are the results.昨天我們學(xué)校舉辦了一個(gè)調(diào)查，我們家鄉(xiāng)最特別的地方。下面就是結(jié)果。注意句中使用了the most special,最特殊的，那么文章接下來些的就是介紹地方特殊之處。注意使用自己熟悉的語言，適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句意緊湊流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章中大量的使用了形容詞的最高級(jí)，如 the best park， the cleanest water，the best， the most comfortable seats， the best teachers，the most beautiful and biggest campus等等。并且使用了連詞but, because, 使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊，邏輯更清楚。