Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)(共10分）

根據(jù)所給表格提示，比較兩個(gè)城市，寫(xiě)一篇短文。

	Beijing	Hangzhou
Location(位置)	North	South
Climate(氣候)	hot/cold	warm
Population	17 million	6 million
Places of interest (名勝)	The Forbidden City紫荊城	West Lake 西湖

要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80-100個(gè)詞。 2.語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)流暢。

I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing and Hangzhou.

Answer 1

One possible version：

Beijing locates in the north of China,which is one of the big cities in our country. The population is quite large, which is 17 million. The weather of this city is totally different in summer and winter,in summer it is very hot, while people will feel very cold in winter. are also a large number of places of interest in Beijing, for example, the forbidden city is the palace of the emperor in the past.

Compared to Beijing,Hangzhou is in the south of China, and there are only 6 million people in this city, which accounts for a little proportion. The weather here is very comfortable, as it is always warm all the year.The West Lake is one of places of interest in Hangzhou.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹北京和杭州這兩個(gè)城市的位置、氣候、人口和名勝。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：which is…，The weather of this city is …，while people will…，as it is…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意完整表達(dá)出表格中所列內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了北京的位置、氣候，接下來(lái)介紹北京的名勝，最后介紹杭州的位置、氣候和名勝。此處in the north of，places of interest ，accounts for這些詞組的運(yùn)用以及定語(yǔ)從句which is one of the big cities in our country和which is 17 million.和運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

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