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6．《中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)》向廣大中學(xué)生發(fā)起主題為"How to build a harmonious（和諧的） school"的英語征文．假如你是趙明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表提示給該報(bào)編輯寫封信，發(fā)表自己的看法
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How to build a harmonious school
Dear editor，
Our country calls for everyone to try their best to build a harmonious society．As a student，I think it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．Whatcan wedo to achievethe goal？
First of all，we should try our best to protect the school environment．We are supposed to plant more trees and flowers to make our school more beautiful．We should pick up the litter on the road and throw it into the dustbin．We mustn't pick flowers or step on the grass．Second，we should fill the world with love，we should show respect to our teachers．What's more，we shouldcare for each other andhelp those in need．The most important point is that all of us must be honest in our daily life．Finally，we should obey the school rules and play an active part in school activies．
Let's start right now to build a harmonious school．
Yours，
Zhao Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As a student，I think it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．
句中"it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．"為賓語從句，使用的短語為"it is one's duty to do sth 做…是某人的責(zé)任"．這句話意為：作為學(xué)生，我認(rèn)為努力建設(shè)一個(gè)和諧校園是我們的責(zé)任．
高分句型二：
What's more，we should care for each other and help those in need．
句中短語有"what's more 再者，而且"、"care for 照顧"、"in need 在困難中的"．這句話意為：再者，我們應(yīng)該彼此照顧并幫助需要幫助的人．

解答 Dear editor，
       Our country calls for everyone to try their best to build a harmonious society．As a student，I think it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．【高分句型一】What can we do to achieve the goal？（開篇點(diǎn)題）
       First of all，we should try our best to protect the school environment．We are supposed to  plant more trees and flowers to make our school more beautiful．We should pick up the litter on the road and throw it into the dustbin．We mustn't pick flowers or step on the grass．Second，we should fill the world with love，we should show respect to our teachers．What's more，we should care for each other and help those in need．【高分句型二】The most important point is that all of us must be honest in our daily life．Finally，we should obey the school rules and play an active part in school activies．（提出建議）
        Let's start right now to build a harmonious school．（發(fā)出倡議）
Yours，
Zhao Ming

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