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4．用微笑播撒陽光，用行動(dòng)踐行夢想，用一種無形的精神力量感染著身邊的每一個(gè)人，為同學(xué)們樹立了一個(gè)個(gè)積極向上的榜樣--這就是"陽光少年"．
某中學(xué)自開展"向陽光少年學(xué)習(xí)"的活動(dòng)以來，我們的身邊涌現(xiàn)了許許多多的"陽光少年"，請你以"A Sunshine Teenager"為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹一位你身邊的"陽光少年"（假如這位陽光少年名叫 Xiao Hui）．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．誠實(shí)善良、團(tuán)結(jié)友愛、樂于助人；
2．熱情、活潑、開朗、樂觀向上；
3．熱愛勞動(dòng)、不怕困難、心懷感恩，積極為父母、師長分憂；
4．勤奮好學(xué)，積極參加各種文體活動(dòng)．
參考詞匯：friendly；be ready；
warm hearted；outgoing； active； housework； be afraid； share；take an active part in；
寫作要求：
1．詞數(shù)不少于 90（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）；
2．內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名．

Answer 1

分析 本文是按照提綱作文的要求，介紹身邊的陽光少年，要從誠實(shí)善良、熱愛勞動(dòng)、和勤奮好學(xué)等方面來書寫，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來表達(dá)，主要用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，注意寫作的連貫性和語言的通順．

解答 Hello!My name is Xiao Ming．I'm studying in No.1．Middle School．Our school had an activity"Learn fromSunshine Teenagers"．From then on，there are many sunshine teenagers around us．
    Xiao Hui is one of them．He is honest and kind．He gets on well with others．He is always ready to not only help others but also go to the old people's home to do something for the olds．He reads newspapers for them，cleans their rooms and washes their clothes．Also he is warm-hearted，active and outgoing．He always shares all kinds of his parents'housework，like doing the dishes，sweeping the floor and making dinner．He is never afraid of different difficulties．He works very hard and he likes reading．And he takes an active in all kinds of sports．After school，he plays football with his teammates．And he joins the school clubs，like music，art and chess．He learns a lot from his all activities．
     Xiao Hui is my good sunshine teenager．I should learn from him．

點(diǎn)評 本篇是提綱作文，要抓住文章的主題陽光少年來書寫，要首尾呼應(yīng)，層次清楚，做到內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢．