Question

書面表達(dá)(10分)

根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，寫一篇描述災(zāi)害的文章。

3月16日凌晨兩點鐘，一場大火吞噬了福建省福州市某公寓。大火持續(xù)了兩小時，燒毀了許多房子。還有兩人在火中喪命。失火原因是一家飯店用火不當(dāng)(the misuse of fire)。

假設(shè)你當(dāng)時親身經(jīng)歷火災(zāi)并幸運逃生，請展開合理想象，描述火災(zāi)前后及當(dāng)時你的所見所聞和感受，詞數(shù)在120詞左右。

Answer 1

A big fire

A big fire hit m．v flat in Fuzhou，F(xiàn)ujian province at 2：00 a．m．on the early morning of March 16th．It was terrible．

I was in my bedroom，sleeping when suddenly I heard a lot of noise．I opened my door and smelt a heavy smoke coming up into my room very soon．I could see nothing but fire in my room!I felt scared and quite nervous—I was trapped in a fire!I screamed for help but suddenly fell to the ground and began to know nothing．When I came back to life，I found I was taken to the open air，on the ground．Some firemen and my parents were beside me．They smiled and said I was lucky．I realized 1 was safe then．

I felt thankful but still a little frightened．And I was very sad when I heard that the big fire lasted for two hours and burned many houses．We lost our homes and two people even lost their lives in the fire．It started only because of the misuse of fire in a restaurant．

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如And I was very sad when I heard that the big fire lasted for two hours and burned many houses．等，when等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。