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請(qǐng)根據(jù)申請(qǐng)表內(nèi)容完成80詞左右的申請(qǐng)信

Name	Zhao Yang	Date of birth	2000年10月20日
Tele. number	0519—82833988	Email	83445133@qq.com
School	No.6 Middle School	Grade	8
Favourite subjects	生物、英語	Interests and hobbies	收集各種動(dòng)物圖片、聽音樂
Activities to protect wildlife	去年春天和朋友一起去扎龍自然保護(hù)區(qū)參加了保護(hù)鳥類的活動(dòng)。
reasons	喜愛大自然，對(duì)植物動(dòng)物感興趣， 想要更多的了解鳥，人們砍伐樹，鳥越來越少，想做些事情來保護(hù)鳥
Free time	每周六下午2點(diǎn)到5點(diǎn)

Answer 1

Dear Chairperson

I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.I am a Grade 8 student at No.6 Middle School. I’m interestd in collecting pictures of all kinds of animals and listening to music. Last Spring I went to the Zhalong Nature Reserve and take part in an activity to protect the birds. I like nature and I am interested in the animals and plants. I want to know more about the birds. Now many trees have been cut down and the number of birds is becoming smaller and small，The birds are in danger. So I want to do something to protect them.I hope you will agree with me. You can call me on 0519—82833988 or email me at 83445133@qq.com.

Yours truly,

Chao Yang

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般過去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: be interested in，最……感興趣；all kinds of，各種各樣的；cut down，砍伐；the number of，……的樹木；agree with，同意等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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