Question

根據(jù)下面圖示，充分發(fā)揮想象，請(qǐng)你代表九(1)班全體學(xué)生向張老師推薦Jack為學(xué)生會(huì)主席。因?yàn)镴ack具有以下品質(zhì)：

要求： 1．短文必須包括提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)(根據(jù)形容詞，必須用相應(yīng)的行為動(dòng)作進(jìn)行描述)。

2．盡可能用本單元所學(xué)的語(yǔ)法和句型。

3．字?jǐn)?shù)90左右，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Zhang

We are writing to recommend Jack as our new chairperson of the Students Union. We think he has many qualities for this position.

Jack is confindent and is not afraid of making speeches in front of many people. He is clever. He has won several physics competitions, but he is modest and never shows off. Jack is very organized. He plans his study and work very well. He is creative. He always comes up with good ideas for our school activities.(He is always ready to help others, so he is welcome in our class.) We think jack is the most suitable person to be the chairperson of Students’ Union. I hope you agree with us.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，本文用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章主要給老師提出一些建議，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其注意描述人物特征的表達(dá)方式。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: is not afraid of making speeches , shows off, comes up with，還有注意了and 和but 等連接詞的用法。另外文章還用到了賓語(yǔ)從句。 學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。