Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(本題15分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卷指定的位置上。

失敗是成功之母。在過去的初三生活中，你是否犯過錯(cuò)誤并從中得到了寶貴的經(jīng)驗(yàn)與教訓(xùn)，從而取得進(jìn)步？現(xiàn)在請你談?wù)勀阕约涸阱e(cuò)誤中學(xué)到的東西。

內(nèi)容要求如下：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。

2.至少從兩個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕倪M(jìn)步。

3.文章層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語句連貫.

4.詞數(shù)：80~100詞。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

During the past three years, I have made many mistakes. Also, I have got great experience from them.

On the one hand, I have become better at getting on with people. At first, it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates, so I kept myself away from others. Later I found out the reasons and actively made new friends. Now, I have lots of friends. On the other hand, I have become much more confident. In the beginning, I hated going to school and doing all the homework. I acted as a bad student. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress and now I do well in all the subjects.

Failure is the mother of success. I believe I can learn to be even better after my middle school life.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求以失敗是成功之母為話題作文。結(jié)合學(xué)習(xí)生活實(shí)際，講述自己過去的犯錯(cuò)經(jīng)歷要用一般過去時(shí)，從錯(cuò)誤取得的經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)的句子多用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。時(shí)態(tài)考點(diǎn)多，要注意把握。過去犯過的錯(cuò)要提到，從錯(cuò)誤中取得的經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)是重點(diǎn)，得詳寫，在錯(cuò)誤中取得了經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)，對將來要充滿希望，這點(diǎn)要寫到，以立意深遠(yuǎn)。